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DJOld Harry's Tale P1: Welcome to Hell (NOT FINAL)

Published: May 25, 2014

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Ladies and gentlemen, I am starting my novel with this. A six part comic mini-series featuring a central character, Old Harry better known by most of you as the Devil. But this is a story with a twist, it promotes my practical belief about the divine system. You may find things are not as you expected, be warned, Evil does exist...it's just sometimes we don't quite understand it, or want to.

The Dark Judge series belongs to me, it's an original idea so don't steal
Concept art done by the great

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SquirrelKitty76

Feb 27, 2015

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"I want you to go to hell."
If my boss told me that; I'd be rechecking my job description.

I liked much more than your Fox stuff, that being said; it has some of the same problems. There's way too many pages with 6 panels, etc. You've heard all that.

Your story appears to be free of literally all preconceived notions of angels and demons making no reference to books such as the Bible and Dante's Inferno and I'm not sure how to feel about that. But I kinda dig that's it's a mythology all your own. Good work, friendo <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/m/m…" width="15" height="15" alt="

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