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Fox Arc 0-Clean Slate-PART I

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This is the comic script of the prequel story to Foxhole called Clean Slate. The stories Clean Slate and Foxhole will be part of something called ARC 0.
Okay when I was translating this into the comic script I got to about halfway when I realised...DAMN! If I do it all in one part it's gonna be about 40-50 pages, so I decided sod it, I'll do it in two parts. Part two will have much more action in it. 

Also yes I did edit things in the comic script, I proof read, changed things around from the original and added in some new sequences and adjusted Fox's character to make him a bit more tragic but still a badass we can respect and hopefully love...so please read this and do critique or comment. I am nothing without an audience
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:star::star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

Boy, was that quite the ride! You really learn a lot about Fox as a character here. He can be cunning, but caring. You get the sense that he walks a fine line between being a good man, and the beast that resides within. I like how he doesn't want those close to him hurt, almost shutting them out. Especially when he refused to let Sarah get any closer. Fox is going to be in some really good fights I presume, what with all the punishment he can take.

This was really great for a first issue, and I'm really excited to read the next one. All in all, good work my friend.