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First off the cover is from Batman #636, during Jason Todd's return
Okay this is the comic script of Foxhole, things have changed, problems have been addressed and grammar has been corrected (hopefully)
-Fox has come to Gotham and he has already made an enemy with Black Mask. But now he's created something called the God-Code which means he can get into any computer in the world, making him the most dangerous man in Gotham. Will he become an ally or a liability to Batman and will Black Mask be brought to justice?
Edit
Because Daniel can't read the front page, here he is again 
who helped me with the original story and creator of Ronin
who helped me with the original story and creator of RoninMature
© 2014 - 2024 Foxy-Knight
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Overall Vision Originality Technique Impact"I AM THE MASK HERE!" XD
Excellent job as always, you got the canon characters, and Ronin, down pat (though you should mention who he's by <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let…" width="15" height="15" alt="
" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="395" title=" (Lick)"/>). You've given Fox an intriguing intro and really dived into the seedy underbelly of Gotham.You also really feel the emotions of the various characters, especially Fox's rage and sadness over the massacre. The various interactions are also spot on, esp. Fox and Ronin and Fox and Catwoman.
There are however some spelling and grammar issues you might want to double check on; plus the word "whilst" isn't used that often. But overall, a very good job indeed.