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Now this is sweet, and also surprisingly quite retro. When I read this piece it felt almost as if I was hearing a ballad, like whoever made this was singing to their significant other. I find that forgotten and ancient sentiment to be incredibly touching, true I am personally quite partial to the sentimental tones of such sweet words, but it's the manner of which it's presented that really gets me. Sometimes we tend to forget that sometimes the most simplest ways of telling someone we love them is in fact the best way to do so. We don't need fancy words, poetry or jargon of romantic speech. Don't get me wrong it's nice, but it's the heart that counts and that's why I like this piece.
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NiallCloud Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much for your critique & lovely words! ^^
Rouge-Fox Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Student Writer
Anytime my friend, happy to help
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